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meldamoose
08-06-2003, 08:07 AM
Hi im 12 and i love writing songs!!!!!I have have got one for you and can you give me your opinion!
Wish i was free fre as a bird,
I'd have no chains no man or herd,
I'd make my choices and fly up high,
I am a bird free in the sky!

Chorus
Wish i was free free as a bird
had no chains no man or herd be free
whoahao free,
I would fly fly up in the sky
Oh fly fly up so so high,
FREE

When you look down,
What do you see,
One man one woman,
Want to be free,
They have no choice
they are to proud!
They wanna be like you
flying through the clouds!
Free as a bird flying through the clouds.
WHAT DO YOU THINK???Please tell me love mel

Koala
08-09-2003, 04:48 PM
Hey! well thats a lot better then stuff 40 year old considerably famous people are writing, so youre on your way!.

Cuno
08-09-2003, 09:05 PM
Yep, good work! Just keep on reviewing yourself and write whatever you want, that's the way.


Free is when you don't have to pay for nothing or do nothing. We want to be free. Free as the wind.
/Frank Zappa