My satch project

[TeachMe]

do you guys think this intro is to cliche' ?

[TeachMe]

no feedback?

[thefallenangel]

i like the riff nice work.
doesnt sound cliche to me sounds cool

[TeachMe]

I appreciate the feedback.

[snufeldin]

Pretty nice...

I'd make the rythym guitar quieter and bring up the riff. If you get more done post it.

[szulc]

What does this have to do with Satch?
Why are you asking if it is too Cliche'?
Is this a rip off of something?
Are you going to make this into a song or tune or something?
It sound unfinished. Is there more?

My opinion is that it needs more of something. This is a germinal idea, now do something with it.

It sounds like you actually changed it in one spot (I am not sure if that was intentional or not).

[wild_child]

man, dont be so harsh.. he said it was an intro so obviously theres more.
its an original 'in the style of' satch NOT a rip off, and a rip off would be a cliché.

anyway, i think its a cool idea, but maybe it could do with a few variations on the riff. should be some cool foundations to build on though :)

[szulc]

I wasn't implying this was a ripoff, because if it was I didn't recognize it, but I am not sure what this has to do with Satch.
I thought he was implying that he lifted it from some Satch thing (maybe I haven 't heard yet).

It is just a few notes, so what does the rest sound like or is this all there is right now?

I had not intention of being "harsh".

[TeachMe]

sorry I wasnt more clear, this is a riff I am working on for the intro of my song in the style of Joe Satriani....

[szulc]

Is the intro all there is so far?