Need feedback on technique and improv.

[shinkyo00]

Hey everyone, I just recorded a 1 minute long mp3 of my improvisation. I don't know if this post's against the rules so please let me know if it is and I'll delete. Anyhow, I just need someone to review this mp3 to tell me how much more work I need with the technique, and of course, if the improv's even getting anywhere. I can't post the file because of its size(1.85mb) so will someone please add me to msn (shinkyo00@hotmail.com) so I could send the file. Thanks all!



Gary