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Thread: Ne Piece take 2

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    Ne Piece take 2

    Ok so..I re-recorded that last piece I submitted for critiquing, added some midi synth to it, and mixed it all over again. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. The guitar parts are recorded by me on acoustic guitar and a condenser mic. The bowed bass and piano are VSTi's, played by me on a midi keyboard controller.

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/75572738c4eb5686/

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    just realized an error..thread name should be "New", not "Ne". anybody have any feedback at all?

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    seriously? nobody can take a few minutes to offer any feedback or any constructive criticism at all? ridiculous....

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    Patience

    Positive:
    Very good recording of the acoustic guitars. Nice slow feel to the tune. Good instrumentation. Well played. A lot of good stuff in the improv part.

    Negative:
    Not that much really... A few mixing challanges when instruments enter, and IMHO the improv part could have been more melodic to fit the tune, but that maybe have to do with my opinion of taste than anything else.

    Good stuff!!!!

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