Tell me what ya think?

[fader198]

I think this is the right forum for this...anyway, if not, feel free to move it or delete it. Eric's article got me thinking more about writing and arrangements and I'm kinda of new to it.

Tell me what ya think of these two tunes. I know the technique is pretty sloppy and I'm workin' on that. I just want to hear feedback on the flow of the songs and if they are arranged well. ANyway:

Fuego was inspired by T.A.Z. off Black Label Society's first album. I've always wanted to write something like that and finally got around to it.

Auburn is something I stumbled upon while playing Dee very wrong one day.

New tune called Skrying added.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/fader198music.htm

Any feedback or suggestions are welcomed and thank you in advanced.

[Mateo150]

sounds nice, like the fuego piece a lot, sounds like a good part of a song.

The auburn songs sounds good, reminds me of my Emo genre listening days.

[fader198]

Thanks bro. I could definitely see the Fuego piece being expanded.